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The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.

The line graph below shows exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.
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The provided graph delineates the export volumes of rubber ducks across four consecutive years, with distinct trends evident among the United Kingdom (
UK
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), the European Union (
EU
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), and the United States (
USA
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). Throughout the period, the
UK
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 and
EU
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 consistently demonstrated an upward trajectory in rubber duck exports. Commencing at approximately 20,000
units
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 in 2013, the
UK
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 experienced a marginal decline in the subsequent year before rebounding and achieving a steady increase, peaking at around 29,000
units
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 in 2017.
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, the
EU
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 commenced with an export volume of nearly 30,000
units
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 in 2013, temporarily dropping to just over 20,000
units
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 in 2015, but ultimately surpassing the
UK
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's figures and reaching its zenith at over 29,000
units
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 in 2017.
Conversely
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, the
USA
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 exhibited a fluctuating pattern over the same period. Beginning with a modest export volume of 10,000
units
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 in 2013, the
USA
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 witnessed a notable surge in 2014 before maintaining relatively stable figures until 2016.
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, there was a significant downturn in 2017, with exports plummeting to just over 1,000
units
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, marking a substantial decline compared to previous years. In conclusion,
while
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 the
UK
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 and
EU
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 experienced consistent growth in rubber duck exports, the
USA
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 encountered fluctuations and a notable decline in the final year of the period under review

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, eu, usa, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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