The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.

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pie charts

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, how the habits

were spended

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by the

peoples

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people

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in England changed from 1971 to 2001. The habits

divided

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into 7 categories including Books, Computers, Furniture,

Restourants

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restaurants

, Petrol, Cars, and

foods

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food

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Overall

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rapid glance

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graphs

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indicates that the most

spended

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routine was Food with 44 per cent of

whole

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in 1971 which was replaced with Cars by roughly the same portion of 43 per cent in 2001.Computers with 2% and Books

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1% of shares were the less common requirements between

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people in 1971 and 2001, respectively. Back to the details shows that the amount of Petrol and Furniture remained approximately constant,

while

the Computer

intrest

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interest

increased

about

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10%

while

the

Restourants

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restaurants

were

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doubled. Cars percentages was

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half of 2001's value in 1991,as

oppose

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to Food that experienced a significant fall from 44% in 1991 to 14% in 2001.

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20Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

147 words

5.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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