The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anomake comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates
the
how Correct article usage
apply
much
stores opened and closed during a seven-year period in an unnamed state. Correct quantifier usage
many
Overall
, there is a downward trend Linking Words
on
Change preposition
in
the
both figures. Remove the article
apply
However
, the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
shop's
closures outnumbered its openings.
Change noun form
shop
To begin
with, there were more than 8500 newly established Linking Words
store
in 2011. The figure Fix the agreement mistake
stores
then
plunged to Linking Words
the
more than Correct article usage
apply
a
half of its previous number in 2012. Before witnessing a stable decrease Correct article usage
apply
over
2014, it increase steadily Change preposition
in
tried at
around 6000 new stores from 2013 to 2014. Verb problem
to
In
the end of Change the preposition
At
given
period, 2018, there were only 3000 additions to the number of Add an article
a given
the given
the
new Correct article usage
apply
store
in that country.
Fix the agreement mistake
stores
Conversely
, the case of Linking Words
shop's
closure which was less in Change noun form
shop
the
2011, fluctuated before experiencing a Change the article
apply
radican
downward in 2015 from above 6000 at the beginning to below 1000. Afterwards, the Correct your spelling
radical
Radican
amount
of stores closed rose dramatically and reached its peak at approximately 5000 a year after the Change the quantifier
number
fell
. The were 5000 shops closed Replace the word
fall
in
the end of the given period after Change the preposition
at
faced
a stable state between 2016 and 2017.Wrong verb form
facing
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