Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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companies
films
because they enough
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have enough
film
but recently digital technology are
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apply
films
freely.They have many merits and demerits in forthcoming
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Today
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generation
try
to make Correct subject-verb agreement
tries
film
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films
low
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a low
buget
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budget
it
allow people to do new creative things or helps them for Correct pronoun usage
which
there
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their
furture
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future
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example
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student
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a student
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tries
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making
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films
then
make films
or produced
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produce
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also
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nowadays,
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use
phone
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them on
youtube
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YouTube
then
youtube
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YouTube
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also
play
a big role on job oriented purposes Correct subject-verb agreement
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by making
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a film
his
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their
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companies
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products
film
clips.
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