The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant
noodles
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.
Overall
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, instant
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noodles
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noodle
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producing is
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production
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includes several steps
that
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apply
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from mixing ingredients,
making
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and making
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forms, to cooking and
finally
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packing for shipment.
To begin
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with, flour is transported by
track
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truck
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and put into the shortage silos to send to the mixer. Once they are sent to the mixer, it mixed with water and oil
in
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it
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. As soon as it is mixed enough, the mixed thing goes through rollers, where the mixed thing turns into dough sheets. The dough sheets are cut into dough strips, and after that, it is formed round noodle discs. After that, noodle discs are cooked in oil and dried. The cooked
noodles
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are put into cups with vegetables and spices respectively.
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this
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, the Labells are onto the cups. The cups
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also
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sealed at the same time. The final instant
noodles
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product is now ready for shipment.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • rolled out
  • thin strips
  • steaming process
  • partially cooked
  • fried
  • dehydrating
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • quality control
  • standards
  • flavoring powder
  • sauce packet
  • traditional pasta
  • dehydration
  • instant cooking
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