The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing instant
noodles
. Overall
, instant noodles
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noodle
producing is
includes several steps Wrong verb form
production
that
from mixing ingredients, Correct pronoun usage
apply
making
forms, to cooking and Correct word choice
and making
finally
packing for shipment.
To begin
with, flour is transported by track
and put into the shortage silos to send to the mixer. Once they are sent to the mixer, it mixed with water and oil Correct your spelling
truck
in
Change preposition
apply
it
. As soon as it is mixed enough, the mixed thing goes through rollers, where the mixed thing turns into dough sheets. The dough sheets are cut into dough strips, and after that, it is formed round noodle discs. After that, noodle discs are cooked in oil and dried. The cooked Correct pronoun usage
apply
noodles
are put into cups with vegetables and spices respectively. Following
this
, the Labells are onto the cups. The cups also
sealed at the same time. The final instant Add a missing verb
are also
noodles
product is now ready for shipment.Submitted by mayu1022.p on
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