The maps demonstrate the development of Islip town center from the present to the future.
There are two maps of the development of Islip town. One represents the present and the other illustrates the future arrangement.
Overall
, there will be a dual carrageway
which circles the centre area in the future and the countryside will be used as there will be new arrangements.
Correct your spelling
carriageway
According to
the information shown in
the map, the shops on the north side of the main road will be replaced by a bus station, a shopping centre, a parking space and new housing.Change preposition
on
By contrast
, the shops which are on the south side of the main road now stay at the same locations in the plan. Besides
, the school on the west - south
side of Islip town centre is planned to be expanded on its site which is between the dual carriageway and the school. Correct your spelling
west-south
On the other hand
, the park will become smaller than its present space. What should be particularly mentioned is that there is an additional road for pedestrians only.Submitted by s99104032 on
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