The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map illustrates the centre of Paris. A company is planning to open a new restaurant there and there are two possible sites for it.
Overall
, the two possible locations are on the banks beside the River Seine. One is close to the right bank and the other is near the left bank.
According to
the information shown on the map, location
1 is on the north side which is close to Bir-Hakerm Bridge and the Maritime Museum which has 8000 visitors each day. On the other hand
,location
2 is in the southern region where the Eiffel Tower is located.There are 16000 people visiting the Eiffel Tower each day. On the east side of location
2, there is an art gallery which has 750 visits per day. What should be particularly mentioned is that both locations have a park nearby.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that location
2 is possibly to attract more customers than location
1 since the number of visitors to the Eiffel Tower is as much as two times that to the Maritime Museum.Submitted by s99104032 on
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