The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anomake comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
number
of business closures and openings
in one nation in the year
2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number
of stores that closed and opened has both decreased over the period. However
, it can be noted that the shop opening has dramatically decreased in the end.
Store openings
were the highest in the year
2011 with approximately 8500. However
, it dropped to more than half in the following year
. Openings
started to rise again the
next two years reaching 6000 in 2014 before declining in 2015. Since Change preposition
in the
then
, business openings
remained relatively the same at around 4000 and ended at around 3000, the lowest among the periods.
On the other hand
, the number
of shops that closed from 2011 to 2014 were
around 6200 to 7100. In 2015, the numbers dramatically dropped to only 500, the lowest Change the verb form
was
number
in all years. However
, closures of businesses significantly rose again the following year
with more than 5000 shops and remained relatively the same until 2018.Submitted by yoko.onerom on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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