The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table given illustrates the expenditure on various categories in a number of nations in 2002. From an
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perspective, it is evident that the proportion of spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco in all five countries was significantly higher than the total data on the other sectors. Of all nations, Turkey's citizens expended the highest percentage of their
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budget on Food/Drinks/Tobacco, at 32.14%. The figures for Ireland and Spain were lower, at 28.91% and 18.80%, respectively, compared to 16.36%
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Italians. Swedish,
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, accounted for the lowest value, at only 15.77%.
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, the percentage of income which inhabitants paid for Clothing/Footwear in Italy was 9.00%,
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the data on Ireland, Spain, and Turkey were somewhere in the vicinity of 6.50%, at 6.43%, 6.51% and 6.63%, in the given order.
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, the remaining region allocated 5.40% of their budget for
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sector. In
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of Leisure/Education, the proportions of expenditures on these items in all places were below 5%, which
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the lowest spending category.
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