The maps demonstrate the development of Islip town center from the present to the future.
The map illustrates the current features of
Correct article usage
the islip
islip
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Islip
town
centre
and the future planned development.
Overall
, there will be more housing developed throughout the town
centre
as well as
new
dual carriageway. Add an article
a new
Moreover
, the town
centre
will have new facilaties
provided to the public.
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facilities
Firstly
, the main road will be transformed to
Change preposition
into
pedestrians
only street Fix the agreement mistake
pedestrian
while
the town
centre
will be incircled
by a road with two lanes. Correct your spelling
encircled
In
addition
the north side shop will be replaced with bus station, Add a comma
addition,
shoping
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shopping
centre
, car park and new housing by being expanded to the countryside.
Furthermore
, in
the south side, the park will be significantly reduced in size Change preposition
on
whereas
the school will get bigger and
new housing will be built near the park and housing next to the school will have access to the new highway.Correct word choice
apply
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