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The diagram describes the standardized steps necessary for the production of leather goods.

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process encompassed eleven key stages, starting from drying the material till the various types of leather goods are produced and ready for distribution to wholesalers for consumption. In the beginning, the animal

skin

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is hung on a line which helps it exposed to the sun.

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, if it gets dry enough, it will get docked in the trucks and destined for the factory.

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, the

skin

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is cleansed using a mixture of water and lime in order to prevent harmful bacteria.

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, it is

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submerged in lime before flattening by the machine. After that phase, the flattened

skin

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is soaked in tannin which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Afterwards, the

skin

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is immediately polished prior to being transported back to the plant by lorries. Upon arrival at the factory,

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skin

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manufactures shoes, bags

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sports materials and be prepared for sale.

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The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

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Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case

Nowadays more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?