The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.
The diagram describes the standardized steps necessary for the production of leather goods.
Overall
,
this
process encompassed eleven key stages, starting from drying the material till the various types of leather goods are produced and ready for distribution to wholesalers for consumption. In the beginning, the animal
skin
is hung on a line which helps it exposed to the sun.
Subsequently
, if it gets dry enough, it will get docked in the trucks and destined for the factory.
Following
this
, the
skin
is cleansed using a mixture of water and lime in order to prevent harmful bacteria.
Moreover
, it is
then
submerged in lime before flattening by the machine. After that phase, the flattened
skin
is soaked in tannin which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Afterwards, the
skin
is immediately polished prior to being transported back to the plant by lorries. Upon arrival at the factory,
this
skin
manufactures shoes, bags
as well as
sports materials and be prepared for sale.
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