You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: describe the vacation spot you have chosen explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation.
Dear Murod,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. We are going to have a vacation with colleagues that you worked with 5 years ago. We will go out at 7 am next sunday
.
There Change the capitalization
Sunday
was
a lot of varieties to Correct subject-verb agreement
were
pcik
a place but we Correct your spelling
pick
choose
a house near the beach. Wrong verb form
chose
House
was horrible but builders are giving Correct article usage
The house
promices
to rebuild to our date.
There are a lot of plans to waste our time and we Correct your spelling
promises
promise
chose
only Wrong verb form
choose
Correct article usage
the bests
bests
of them.
Correct your spelling
best
Firstly
we will go for a walk above the beach and play games until lunch. Next after having a
Remove the article
apply
lunch
we are going to invite girls and feel our 2 hours in heaven. Add a comma
lunch,
Finally
after all of Add a comma
Finally,
this
we will go to Add a comma
this,
night
club and be there until tomorrow. It will be awesome if you come with us. Your former colleagues are sharing their Add an article
a night
the night
happpiness
with you and me Correct your spelling
happiness
also
. In the end, sometimes you should take a vacation to don't forget your friends moreover
Correct word choice
and moreover
feing
far from problems.
Best regards,
JoXaCorrect your spelling
feel
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logical structure
Consider organizing your letter with a clear introduction, detailed body paragraphs, and a concise conclusion to enhance the logical structure and coherence of your message.
greeting and closing
Start your letter with a friendly greeting and end with a warm closing to make your letter more personal and engaging.
single idea per paragraph
Focus on elaborating one main idea or activity per paragraph to improve clarity and flow. This will make your letter more coherent and easier to follow.
complete response
Ensure your letter completely addresses all parts of the task. Describe the vacation spot more vividly, explain your plans in more detail, and make your invitation to your friend more personal and inviting.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. Consider the appropriateness of mentioning certain activities in a letter to a friend and strive for a tone that is friendly, respectful, and inviting.