You are visiting a town where you once worked. Write a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about life now. Give him/her details of your visit. Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Alex,
How are you? I hope you are doing great .I have been wanting to go
to
back to my old job in Canada, where you and I met. I have never been able to do it before . Now I have Change preposition
apply
this
opportunity.
As you already know my life
started to get better from period
of my work in America Add an article
the period
a period
moreover
; I started investing, selling clothes and much more, I bought a 2-storey house, got married and have a son and daughter. Based on this
, my life
has improved slightly.
I just finished all my business a couple of days ago and decided that the whole family will go to Canada. I will improve my skills there and we can meet you in our company called " Salamanders"
As you know, we are still young, how about we meet at our old cafe. The location of the cafe is still in the city centre under the big bridge where we loved
to sit on Sundays, there is still Wrong verb form
love
same
atmosphere of comfort if you agree, let's move our meeting to Change the article
the same
this
week, we can discuss a lot about our life
, how you like to tell stories from life
.
I look forward to your reply with great enthusiasm.
Kind regards,
ArthurSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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