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the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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 of visitors
in
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to
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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Island
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 from 2010 to 2017. in 2017 total tourist has been
significatly
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significantly
 increased, from 1 million visitors to 3,5 million people,
this
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 is
the
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a
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 huge number that was made from 2010. In 2017 having a holiday on cruise ships is very popular because they would enjoy the vibes of the sea and do the unusual staycation to make the memorable things. the graphs
shows
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show
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 the
uniqe
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unique
moving
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move
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 that
visitor
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visitors
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 staying on cruise ships seems slightly down in 2012, but
continue
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continued
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 to
raise
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rise
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untill
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until
reach
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reached
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 a
peack
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peak
 at 2
millons
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million
 of visitors.
Due to
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popularity
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the popularity
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 of staying on cruise
ship
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ships
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 cause staying on
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island
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the island
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 isn't that
spacial
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special
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 so
that
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apply
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the
visitor
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number of visitors
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 seems slightly down in 2016. The
advertisment
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advertisement
of
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for
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 staying on
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island
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the island
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need
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needs
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 to
do
Verb problem
be
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fix
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fixed
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 and
renew
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renewed
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 so that the
tourist
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tourists
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 would
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be interest
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interest
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interested
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 to live in the
island
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.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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