the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

write at least 150 words.
This
graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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of visitors
in
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to
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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Island
from 2010 to 2017. in 2017 total tourist has been
significatly
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significantly
increased, from 1 million visitors to 3,5 million people,
this
is
the
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a
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huge number that was made from 2010. In 2017 having a holiday on cruise ships is very popular because they would enjoy the vibes of the sea and do the unusual staycation to make the memorable things. the graphs
shows
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show
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the
uniqe
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unique
moving
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move
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that
visitor
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visitors
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staying on cruise ships seems slightly down in 2012, but
continue
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continued
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to
raise
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rise
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untill
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until
reach
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reached
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a
peack
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peak
at 2
millons
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million
of visitors.
Due to
popularity
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the popularity
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of staying on cruise
ship
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ships
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cause staying on
island
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the island
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isn't that
spacial
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special
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so
that
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apply
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the
visitor
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number of visitors
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seems slightly down in 2016. The
advertisment
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advertisement
of
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for
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staying on
island
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the island
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need
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needs
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to
do
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be
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fix
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fixed
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and
renew
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renewed
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so that the
tourist
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tourists
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would
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be interest
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interest
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interested
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to live in the
island
.
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