the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.
This
graph illustrates the amount
of visitors Change the quantifier
number
in
Change preposition
to
Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017. in 2017 total tourist has been significatly
increased, from 1 million visitors to 3,5 million people, Correct your spelling
significantly
this
is the
huge number that was made from 2010.
In 2017 having a holiday on cruise ships is very popular because they would enjoy the vibes of the sea and do the unusual staycation to make the memorable things. the graphs Correct article usage
a
shows
the Change the verb form
show
uniqe
Correct your spelling
unique
moving
that Wrong verb form
move
visitor
staying on cruise ships seems slightly down in 2012, but Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
continue
to Wrong verb form
continued
raise
Correct your spelling
rise
untill
Correct your spelling
until
reach
a Wrong verb form
reached
peack
at 2 Correct your spelling
peak
millons
of visitors. Correct your spelling
million
Due to
popularity
of staying on cruise Correct article usage
the popularity
ship
cause staying on Fix the agreement mistake
ships
island
isn't that Add an article
the island
spacial
so Correct your spelling
special
that
the Correct word choice
apply
visitor
seems slightly down in 2016. The Fix the agreement mistake
number of visitors
advertisment
Correct your spelling
advertisement
of
staying on Change preposition
for
island
Add an article
the island
need
to Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
do
Verb problem
be
fix
and Wrong verb form
fixed
renew
so that the Wrong verb form
renewed
tourist
would Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Add a missing verb
be interest
interest
to live in the Replace the word
interested
island
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