The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015

The chart beneath illustrates the number of US residents with their yearly income in 2007

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2011 and 2015

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Mar 11, 2024

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

20 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Economic landscape
Household income
Economic health
Income brackets
Trends
Inflation
Unemployment rates
Job market
Income disparity
Housing affordability
Access to education
Quality of life
Economic policies
Income inequality
Mitigating

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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007,2011 and 2015

You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – introduce yourself – explain the situation – say what action you would like to company to take.

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some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication.will benefits of this out with the problems associated with it ?