Nowadays, many
people
consider that
governmentCorrect article usage
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have
dutyAdd an article
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to help their
civilReplace the word
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improvingWrong verb form
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their health. In my opinion, I mainly agree with that.
On the
one
hand,
awardingVerb problem
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people
payFix the infinitive
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more attention
inChange preposition
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health has
it’sReplace the word
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benefitFix the agreement mistake
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.
People
are
majorityCorrect article usage
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labour of
one
region. They can make
hundredCorrect article usage
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billion dollars
annualChange the word
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year. Consuming products in daily life and
payWrong verb form
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taxFix the agreement mistake
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forChange preposition
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governmentAdd an article
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.
Therefore
governments have
duty to repay
this
back to their national
people
. Of course.
One
way is
recallChange the verb form
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people
take care
themselvesChange preposition
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through
advertisementChange the noun form
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,
such
as social media, TV shows or
warningFix the agreement mistake
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beside the road. It helps
governmentCorrect article usage
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improvingWrong verb form
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the quality of
laboursFix the agreement mistake
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and decreasing
the number of
paymentFix the agreement mistake
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in civil welfare.
On the opposite, as I mentioned before,
governmentAdd an article
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should take
their Correct pronoun usage
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responsibility
to payChange preposition
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human’sChange noun form
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welfare. If there were
largeChange the article
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amount of
people
getting sick,
governmentAdd an article
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willWrong verb form
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pay considerable money
onChange preposition
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it. No
one
wantChange the verb form
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to get into that situation.
Thus
, reminding
people
to prevent
from Change preposition
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illness will be more effective than
payWrong verb form
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their bill
ofChange preposition
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treatment, because once someone
goChange the verb form
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to hospital,
whateverCorrect word choice
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serious or not,
governmentCorrect article usage
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should spend a part of
moneyAdd an article
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, maybe occupied six in ten.
For example
, if someone
gotVerb problem
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a headache
and went to see a doctor, personally taking $200 and
then
governmentCorrect article usage
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paying $120 for him or
sheChange the pronoun
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.
However
, it only pays $50
for advertisingChange preposition
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how it is impossible for
people
do Unnecessary verb
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not
stayFix the infinitive
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up late, and
then
, it will avoid
this
happenedWrong verb form
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.
In conclusion, a healthy lifestyle is important for everyone. I mainly agree that
governmentCorrect article usage
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takeWrong verb form
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more attention
inChange preposition
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the prevention of
healthyReplace the word
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problems and illness rather than treatment and medicine because it
willWrong verb form
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be brilliant
thatCorrect word choice
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governmentCorrect article usage
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could
makeVerb problem
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more
profits from it.