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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
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The tables provide details about the
income
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 generated by
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coffee
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the coffee
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 and banana industry in
five
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 nations in Europe in the
year
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years
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 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, the
income
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 of
coffee
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 in
five
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 countries has increased after
five
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 years,
while
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 the
income
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 of bananas rose in most countries.
However
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, the money generated by bananas
were
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was
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 significantly higher compared to
coffee
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 in both periods. Switzerland had the highest sales of
coffee
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 in 1999 with 1.8
million
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pounds
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 and doubled in 2004.
On the other hand
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, the sales in
UK
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the UK
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 went up dramatically from 1.5 to 20
million
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pounds
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 after
five
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 years. Belgium increased by 0.7%,
while
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 Denmark and Sweden had a slight increase in 2004. With regards to bananas, the profits in Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium went up from 15, 1, 0.6
million
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pounds
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 to 47, 5.5, and 4
million
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pounds
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 in 2004, respectively.
On the contrary
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, the profits in Sweden and Denmark decline after half a decade. Sweden decreased from 1.8 to 1
million
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pounds
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,
whild
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while
 Denmark 0.9
million
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pounds
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, the lowest
income
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 in
banana
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the banana
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 industry in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, coffee, five, million, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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