The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whererelevant.
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The tables provide details about the
income
generated by coffee
and banana industry in Correct article usage
the coffee
five
nations in Europe in the year
1999 and 2004.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, the income
of coffee
in five
countries has increased after five
years, while
the income
of bananas rose in most countries. However
, the money generated by bananas were
significantly higher compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
coffee
in both periods.
Switzerland had the highest sales of coffee
in 1999 with 1.8 million
pounds
and doubled in 2004. On the other hand
, the sales in UK
went up dramatically from 1.5 to 20 Correct article usage
the UK
million
pounds
after five
years. Belgium increased by 0.7%, while
Denmark and Sweden had a slight increase in 2004.
With regards to bananas, the profits in Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium went up from 15, 1, 0.6 million
pounds
to 47, 5.5, and 4 million
pounds
in 2004, respectively. On the contrary
, the profits in Sweden and Denmark decline after half a decade. Sweden decreased from 1.8 to 1 million
pounds
, whild
Denmark 0.9 Correct your spelling
while
million
pounds
, the lowest income
in banana
industry in 2004.Add an article
the banana
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