Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that only a few wild animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that more and more wild

animals

are likely to be extinct in the future if we do not take any actions to protect them.

However

, there are arguments among the people that all

animals

or only selected

species

should be protected.In the next paragraph, I will discuss both views and provide my own opinion.

To begin

with,wild

animals

are

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living in the same land as

human

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humans

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for many decades.They should be treated as living

species

not as

an objects

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objects

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.

Therefore

, all mammals should be protected equally by

human

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humans

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.

Beside

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that, it is essential for maintaining

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a balance

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balance

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balanced

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ecosystems

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ecosystem

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. Every

species

play

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plays

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a critical role in the ecosystem and

this

have

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negative

imptacts

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impacts

on

human

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humans

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if the

animals

begin to extinct.

For example

, the

carol reef

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Carol Reef

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in the ocean is vital for marine

species

to seek

for

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apply

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protection and

foods

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food

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, as for

the

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human

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humans

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, it helps us to

pervent

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prevent

waves from hitting the coast.

On the other hand

,financial

supports

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support

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are

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the main reason

of

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for

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the

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people to

choice

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choose

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on few

animals

to protect.

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promoting

this events

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need

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enormous money to do so.

Due to

this

issue, many organizations are suggesting

on

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which

species

are the priority to provide

balance

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balanced

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encosystems

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ecosystems

and benefits to the globe.

For example

, marine

species

are important in order to keep the ocean to generate enough oxygen

to

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for

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the world .

Hence

, without

the

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fresh

breatheable

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breathable

air , human beings will not exist at all. In conclusion,it is important to prioritize endangered

species

.

However

, a holistic approach to conservation

aim

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to protect as many mammals as

posible

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possible

is vital for the health of our planet.In my opinion,we should put some

efforts

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to ensure

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into ensuring

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all wild

animals

be

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are

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protected in order to maintain

balance

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a balance

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biodiversity

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between biodiversity

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and ecosystems.