The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map displays the centre of Paris.There are some individuals who have an idea to establish a new restaurant in the area.The map illustrates the few options for constructing the restaurant.
Overall
, it is evident that in location
2,there are much more facilities rather than in location
1.
To commence with, the first probable area where the restaurant will be set up is predicted to be on the northwest side of Paris. Moreover
, there are some leisure facilities such
as the Maritime Museum, which is located to the north of the Park, and this
park is shown on the south side of the map. Then
, on the southeast, there will be the aquarium with 2000 attendees each day.
When it comes to location
2, there will be significantly more buildings around such
as the Eiffel Tower, which is erected in the south of the city named Paris. Furthermore
, it is expected that the Art gallery with 750 visitors each day will be located on the southeast side. Last
but not least, it is predicted that the Sports Centre will be near to the Park.
It may be concluded that in location
2 it is foreseen that there will be much more options in comparison with 1 location
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