In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping malls or centres to do their shopping. Does this have a positive or a negative development?

Nowadayes

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Nowadays

,

shoping

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shopping

habits are changed significantly. Most

of

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the

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people prefer to buy their needs from shopping

centers

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.

It is clear that

the improvement in technology and a big variant in modern and traditional

life styles

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can

effect

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any daily activities and habits including marketing and shopping. In

this

essay

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I discuss that the specific discrepancy in shopping patterns is necessary and unavoidable. New urban designs are one of the most important

reason

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which make people

to

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choose malls as their shopping destinations,

for example

establishing highways

reduce

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reduces

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the

accessibilty

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accessibility

of

peoples

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people

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to local streets and

consequently

shops, or at least

harden

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it

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them

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.

Additionally

,

as a result

of

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appearance

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of big changes in roading and urban mapping

consequently

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lead to

lack

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a lack

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of enough time to go from one local shop to another ,

thus

most of the citizens prefer to collect all the things they need from a

center

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which

reduce

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reduces

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their commuting time.

On the other hand

, local shops have to move to the

centers

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in order to survive, in spite of

annoying

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force of

this

movemnet

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movement

, but

in

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result

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it can increase their customers and have a

possitive

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positive

effect on their marketing

,

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because by

this

relocating their audience become larger from local individuals to those who come from all

neighboures

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neighbours

in the city. In conclusion ,

this

shifting

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from local

shop

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shops

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to

center

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centre

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stores can be beneficial for both

salers

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sales

sellers

and customers

besides

, makes

marketting

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marketing

wider, more convenient and accessible.