You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you.Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: give details about the concert describe how you won the tickets explain why you have chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Guli ,
How are you? I hope you are enjoying your holiday in the attractive city where
is
I live. Anyway, I am writing to invite you to the Unnecessary verb
apply
concert
of the rap music's
king who is Eminem.
Actually, I haven'Change noun form
music
t
got extra money to buy ticket
for some kind of Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
concerts
or Fix the agreement mistake
concert
entertainments
. Fix the agreement mistake
entertainment
Last
week , I played a lottery
game with my neighbor
. At Change the spelling
neighbour
first,
I didn't
have any plan for
buy Change preposition
to
lottery
. But Jack suggested me
Correct pronoun usage
I
to
buy it and take a risk. After Fix the infinitive
apply
that
I bought Add a comma
that,
lottery
with good value Correct article usage
a lottery
of
money and that money Change preposition
apply
given
to me for Add a missing verb
was given
a
lunch by my father. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, I didn't
wait for any prize. However
, I was surprised with
yesterday's unbelievable information that's my award for the Change preposition
by
lottery
's number.
If I remember rightly, you used to love listening rap
Change preposition
to rap
musics
, especially your Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
favorite
singer Change the spelling
favourite
is
Eminem too. That's why, I suddenly wanted to invite you Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as a partner with me to go to the Correct quantifier usage
apply
concert
. I hope ,
the best moments are waiting for us Remove the comma
apply
while
the Change preposition
at
concert
that is
going to show
tomorrow evening.
Wrong verb form
be shown
Additionally
, your invited
to my city is good for me Replace the word
invitation
also
. Because all of my family members, and other friends don't
like rap music. And they
said Correct word choice
They
that is
difficult
Correct article usage
a difficult
types
of music to understand the words.
And I haven'Fix the agreement mistake
type
t
got any options, except you.
I hope you will go to the concert
with me . Please let me know your answer as soon as possible.
Your
sincerely ,
NozigulCorrect the word
Yours
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Structure
Ensure your letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion to enhance readability and coherence.
Paragraphing
Use clear and concise paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea, to improve the flow of information and maintain the reader's attention.
Content
To improve task response, make sure all parts of the prompt are fully addressed. Include more detail about the concert, such as the date, venue, and any special activities planned, to make the letter more informative.
Tone
Adopt a tone that is appropriate for writing to a friend, which can be informal but should still be respectful and enthusiastic to fully convey your excitement and the significance of the event.
Grammar and Vocabulary
Correct grammar and spelling errors, and use a varied vocabulary to effectively communicate your message and make the letter more engaging.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
