The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010

The bar chart compares the percentage of renewable

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supplied

for

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four different countries, namely

australia

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Australia

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sweden

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Sweden

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,

Iceland

,

Turkey

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and Turkey

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during the

period

from 1997 to 2010.

Overall

, it was clear that the proportion of renewable

energy

used in

Iceland

was always the highest in almost three years.

Moreover

, the consumption of

Sweden

and

Iceland

increased continuously over the

period

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.

Firstly

, in 1997, around 45% of renewable

energy

used

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by

Iceland

which was a lot

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higher than that in

Sweden

only about 5%.

However

, renewable

energy

in both

Sweden

and

Iceland

saw

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growth

about

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9% and 70 % respectively during the

period

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.

Secondly

, there was a

gradually

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decrease in the percentage of using renewable

energy

in Australia from around 10% to under 5% at the same

period

. The figure for Turkey began at around 38% in 1997, increasing to over 40% in 2000 and

finally

hitting

low

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of about 33%

in

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the end of

period

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the period

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.