The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The bar chart compares the percentage of Gross Domestic Product made by the IT
field
and the
Service
industry of the UK during the 1992-2000 years period.
Overall
, there was a gradual soar in the IT
field
GDP except for a slight drop,
furthermore
, the
Service
industry had a steady increase too.
However
, these two snippets of the GDP of the UK differ in growth they had. The IT sphere had risen a little over twice as much as it used to be in 1992,
whereas
the
Service
indicator had risen twice the time exactly. In 2000 the IT
field
had slightly over fourteen percent in comparison with the
Service
sphere where the percentage was less by six percent.
Also
, the IT indicators had a year where the numbers plummeted, in 1996, to be specific. Meanwhile, the
Service
field
had growth without any wild fluctuations throughout the period. It is worth mentioning, that in 1996 two indicators had the smallest gap between them.
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