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the threeb pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001

the threeb pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001
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The diagram
illustates
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illustrates
 the fluctuations in expenditures by
Brithish
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British
 college in two
diffrent
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different
period
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periods
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such
 as 1981
and1991
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and 1991
. Regarding the first chart (1981), teachers had the
biggest
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highest
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 ratio
respect
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 to the others.
In addition
, insurance had the
last
 position by about 2
percent
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per cent
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. In the middle places, there were other workers,
resources
 books and
last
 but not least furniture
equipement
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equipment
.
Although
 both
of
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resources
 books and
funiture
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furniture
 equipment were held in the middle places, they had the same
value
. In regard
the
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to the
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 second year of record (1991), still teachers had the first position but
this
 time with
the
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a
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 higher
value
 of 50
percent
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per cent
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. In the second
place
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 we have other workers and it was closely followed by the
resources
 books. Insurance kept
it's
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 place and it is
at
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in
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 the
last
 position
at
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on
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 the chart as well.
overall
, It was clearly shown that the
value
 of all the
component
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components
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 shifted up in 1998
compare
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compared
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 to 1991. Even though the
resources
 and other workers had the same
value
 in
the
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1981, they did not have the same
value
 in
the
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1991.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words resources, value with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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