The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. it includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate), and those with other qualifications.

The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. it includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate), and those with other qualifications.
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The line graph illustrates data about the weekly earnings of different age groups and three different groups of people who have a first
degree
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, those with a postgraduate
degree
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, and those with other
qualifications
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in 2002.
It is clear that
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the average earnings of people with other
qualifications
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are considerably higher than those of other groups,
while
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those with a first
degree
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made the least money.
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, it is notable that the weekly income of employees between 36 and 40 years old, with other types of
qualifications
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, is the peak amount throughout the period shown. All figures followed a similar trend for workers aged between 21-25 and 36-40, experiencing a significant rise in their salaries, those with other
qualifications
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reached a peak of 820
pounds
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. Those with other
qualifications
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saw a steady decline as they got older, with their lowest income at just under 700
pounds
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weekly for those between 56 and 60 years old. Regarding those with higher degrees, their salaries leapfrogged those with other
qualifications
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for those aged 56 to 60. The income of people with a
degree
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reached a plateau for those aged between 36 and 40,
then
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dipped slightly to 680
pounds
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for those 46 to 50 years old.
Following
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this
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, the figure increased marginally, ending at 690
pounds
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for those aged 56 to 60.
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