The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese studenta studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese studenta studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
It is widely believed that the most considerable growing industry is tourism making a contribution to the global economy while some individuals argue that it is adversely impacting on culture and environment of the local areas which are often ignored. Although people are concerned about about the raised issues, I still hold the view that developing tourism brings more benefits towards economic growth, mostly solving the aforementioned problems through this development.
In this contemporary epoch, with the extended life expectancy of humans, some individuals think that the increase in the elderly population will create challenges for governments around the world. Opponents and I hold a diverse view. I believe that this will be beneficial for the younger generation. My contention will be further explained.
The prevalence of technological tools in modern society has led to an increase in cyber crimes. Some people believe that intervention from the government is necessary to protect the safety of the public. I partially agree with this, for the growing threat of the invasion of their privacy although the excessive control from the authority can limit access to essential information.
Facing the risk is essential to humans, whether it is a personal matter or it is a lifetime career, I believe its benefits outweigh the negatives because it gives the body more courage and confidence and it can be the turning point to a better lifestyle.
As time goes by, concern for environmental problems has been captivating all people around the world, especially when it comes to pollution. Therefore, taking implementation towards adding the cost of gasoline is the best option to solve traffic congestion and pollution problems. I do agree with this resolution and I would explain with the following reasons which I stand for or another circumstance that might be effective towards those problems.