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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the results of a survey about
people
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's habits of buying
coffee
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 and
tea
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 in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall
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, in the given chart, most
people
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 went to a
cafe
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 for
coffee
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 or
tea
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 and the least
people
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 bought fresh
coffee
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.
According to
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 the chart, we can see that there has about 64
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percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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 went to a
cafe
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 for
coffee
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 or
tea
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 in Melbourne, which is the highest percentage of
people
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 who go to a
cafe
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 for
coffee
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 or
tea
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 in five cities. There are around 49
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percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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 buy instant
coffee
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 and about 43
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percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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 buy fresh
coffee
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. In Brisbane, there are
bout
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about
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 56
percent
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 of
people
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 go to a
cafe
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 for
coffee
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 or
tea
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 and around 53
percent
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 of
people
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 buy instant
coffee
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.
Furthermore
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, there has only about 34
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percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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 buy fresh
coffee
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 which is the lowest percentage of
people
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 who buy fresh
coffee
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 in five cities.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, tea, cafe, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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