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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the results of a survey about
people
's habits of buying
coffee
 and
tea
 in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall
, in the given chart, most
people
 went to a
cafe
 for
coffee
 or
tea
 and the least
people
 bought fresh
coffee
.
According to
 the chart, we can see that there has about 64
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
 went to a
cafe
 for
coffee
 or
tea
 in Melbourne, which is the highest percentage of
people
 who go to a
cafe
 for
coffee
 or
tea
 in five cities. There are around 49
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
 buy instant
coffee
 and about 43
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
 buy fresh
coffee
. In Brisbane, there are
bout
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about
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 56
percent
 of
people
 go to a
cafe
 for
coffee
 or
tea
 and around 53
percent
 of
people
 buy instant
coffee
.
Furthermore
, there has only about 34
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
 buy fresh
coffee
 which is the lowest percentage of
people
 who buy fresh
coffee
 in five cities.
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