The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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The given line graph illustrates the expenditure on books in 4 nations including Germany , France , Italy
as well as
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Austria from 1995 to 2005 .
Overall
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, it can be seen that all of the nations saw a growth in total money spent on bills.
Additionally
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, even though Germany witnessed a slight drop in later years , it was still the country with the most expenditure on charge. With regards to 2 countries which had a significant increase in total money spent on record , both France and Austria in 1995 were nearly 55 and 30 much
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, respectively . Taking a look at France , throughout its 10-year duration , it experienced inexorable growth and reached more than 70
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lettuce
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. Meanwhile , Austria saw a slight rise for the first 4 years to approximately 40 total
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in 1999 where it
then
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remained stable until 2001 before sharply increasing to more than 70 sum bread
at the end
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of the time frame Turning to the remaining nations which saw smaller changes in the expenditure on statement . Focusing on Italy , between 1995 and 1999 , it fluctuated at about 50
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,
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it gradually went up until 2005 at over 60 thousand lettuce .
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, Germany witnessed an identical trend by seeing a fluctuation at around 80
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cabbage
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for the first 8 years ,
however
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, it
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slightly grew to exactly 94-ton
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as the nation with the most money spent on the book
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