Some youngsters
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with their smartphones
longerChange preposition
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time
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.The
post COVIDAdd a hyphen
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change in education to online
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could be a major reason for
this
,
addiction
to social
media
may prone young kids to be with
phones all the
time
.In my opinion,
this
is a negative development and
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are
presented in
this
essay.
To commence with,
recentCorrect article usage
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transition of education to online
flatformCorrect your spelling
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like
zoomCapitalize word
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,
and
have attracted the young
to the
a lot.
WithChange preposition
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the COVID
time
, teachers used to transform their physical classes to online and they used to give all the home
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and
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internetCapitalize word
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, and even in the
post COVIDAdd a hyphen
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era people try to follow the same
due to
it'sReplace the word
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.
For example
, even in a developing country like
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Sri Lanka most
schoolsChange the noun form
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teachers send their
and
home worksCorrect your spelling
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via online
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like ZOOM channels.
Thus
students have to use their easily available mobile phones to do those works by letting them
to Change the verb form
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be
inChange preposition
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their
all the
time
.
Furthermore
,
addiction
to
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social
media
is
a Remove the article
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another main reason for the first mention notion.Some students are
to build their personalities over social
media'sChange noun form
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like Facebook, Tick tok and
Youtube Correct your spelling
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,and they need to be
inChange preposition
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the sites all the
time
responding and making new
stuffsChange the wording
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kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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to maintain their status
inChange preposition
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these platforms.
For instance
,
according to
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recent research done by the
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of
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50% of
school childrenCorrect your spelling
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in
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have their own youtube channels.
Hence
, to maintain them , the kids have to be with their smartphones all the
time
.
In addition
, I believe
this
leads
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younger generation unhealthy.
such
as eye injuries and
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diseases are common with
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present dayAdd a hyphen
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younger generation
due to
inactivity and always looking at a
high resolutionAdd a hyphen
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screen.
In particular
,
according to
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last
yearChange noun form
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national health
30% of children below 15
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are diagnoseChange the verb form
are diagnosed
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with type 2
diabeticReplace the word
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in Sri Lanka.
Therefore
, smartphone
addiction
is a bad trend in
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context.
In
, educational purposes and social
media
addiction
could be major reasons for youngsters to be
inChange preposition
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mobile
all the
time
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this Correct pronoun usage
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can lead to
unhealthyAdd an article
the unhealthy
an unhealthy
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younger generation in the country.
Thus
,
this
writer
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in strong notion that children
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hours every day on their smartphones is a negative development.