The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The given bar chart illustrates how much spending on five variety
consumer
goods
namely Cars
, Computers, Books, perfume
and cameras in two different Fix the agreement mistake
perfumes
nation
Fix the agreement mistake
nations
France
and UK
over the period of 2010.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, it can be seen that UK
spent more mon on Correct article usage
the UK
consumer
goods
than France
while
perfume was the money least popular consumer
goods
of both these nations.
In detail, in cars
, UK
spent Correct article usage
the UK
huge
money Fix the agreement mistake
a lot of
for
buying Change preposition
on
cars
than given
other Verb problem
compared to
consumer
goods
, which was 4,50,000. Similarly
, France
also
spent the most amount on cars
and the least on cameras, which accounts for 4,00,000 and 1,50,000 subsequently
. Book's expenditure was the second-highest in Correct article usage
the UK
UK
, at 4,00,000 meanwhile Correct article usage
the UK
France
had Wrong verb form
spent
spending
3,00,000. Wrong verb form
spent
These both
nations had slight changes Correct determiner usage
Both
on
computers, Change preposition
in
France
was
around 3,75,000 and Verb problem
had
UK
had 3,50,000.
Correct article usage
the UK
In contrast
, perfume was unpopular
Correct article usage
an unpopular
consumer
goods
in Fix the agreement mistake
good
Ok
, only around 1,25,000 but Correct your spelling
OK
France
spent 2,00,000. Change preposition
in France
In addition
, France
spent the least amount for
buying cameras, at 1,50,000 meanwhile Change preposition
on
UK
spent Correct article usage
the UK
huse
money on Correct your spelling
more
this
Change the determiner
these goods
goods
, which accounts for 3,50,000.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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