The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of extracting grease in the manufacture of perfume.
Overall
,
this
process has ten stages, beginning with the generation of heat and ending with the production of hydrolat (aromatic
water
). In the first two stages, a
cylinder
of
water
is brought to a boiling point when the
water
is heated. The resulting
steam
is
then
passed through a pipe to another
cylinder
.
Next,
this
steam
passes through aromatic plants located in
this
second
cylinder
. After the
steam
passes through, a mixture of
steam
and oil vapour rises to the top of
this
cylinder
. At stage six, the mixture of
steam
and vapour is passed through a third barrel, where a coil is immersed in cold aqua, allowing the mixture to condense. Hot
water
is extracted through an outlet pipe during
this
condensation stage, shown as stage seven in the diagram.
Then
,
water
mixed with essential oil passes to a separator. The oil remains on the surface
while
aromatic
water
is drained from the separator through another pipe.
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