The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of extracting grease in the manufacture of perfume.
Overall
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,
this
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process has ten stages, beginning with the generation of heat and ending with the production of hydrolat (aromatic
water
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). In the first two stages, a
cylinder
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of
water
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is brought to a boiling point when the
water
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is heated. The resulting
steam
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is
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passed through a pipe to another
cylinder
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.
Next,
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this
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steam
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passes through aromatic plants located in
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second
cylinder
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. After the
steam
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passes through, a mixture of
steam
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and oil vapour rises to the top of
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cylinder
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. At stage six, the mixture of
steam
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and vapour is passed through a third barrel, where a coil is immersed in cold aqua, allowing the mixture to condense. Hot
water
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is extracted through an outlet pipe during
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condensation stage, shown as stage seven in the diagram.
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,
water
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mixed with essential oil passes to a separator. The oil remains on the surface
while
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aromatic
water
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is drained from the separator through another pipe.
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