The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features

The diagram below illustrates the mass-procedure of

milk

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, it can be seen that there are 8 steps included in

the

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apply

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milk

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production, starting with collecting

milk

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from cows and

end

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ending

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with

milk

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products in both retailers and

whole salers

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wholesalers

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. In the initial stage, cows are milked by

special

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a special

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machine twice a day prior to grazing with grasses.

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the output will be

preserverd

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preserved

in the

refridgeration

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refrigeration

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storage before being lorried to Dairy. By

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step, the subsequence will be pumped through lots of silos for ensuring the standard of its

subtances

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substances

. Moving onto the filtering step, where the qualified

milk

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are

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used as an ingredient in making

Dairy's

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products

as

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such as

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cheeses, butter or

milk

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. In another way,

milk

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is pasteurized and packaged for commercial

consumptions

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consumption

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