The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart presents the percentages of people in five different

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groups in Iceland from 1990 to 2020.

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the data for the two younger

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sets decreased considerably, the adult population from 25 to 54 witnessed an upward tendency and the bracket of citizens over 55 saw the least fluctuations within 30 years. In every decade surveyed, adults aged 25 to 54 accounted for the largest percentage of the Icelandic population. Commencing with just north of 30%, it increased noticeably, reaching approximately half of the population in 2020.

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, the figures for younger

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groups showed downward trends. The people who were

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of 15 to 24 recorded a sharp decline. It fell roughly from 22% in 1990 to 8% in 2020 and ended up as the smallest

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bracket. Meanwhile, children aged under 14, despite dropping from around 25% to 18%, remained the second-highest

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group over the reviewed period. Regarding the elderly categories, in the first ten years, the proportion of 55 to 64 and that of those aged above 65 stood at around 13% and 12%, respectively. Towards the end of the period,

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the former decreased insignificantly to 10%, the data for the latter stayed nearly constant.

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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Tourism is a modern form of colonialism. It distorts local economies, causes environmental damage, ruins the places it exploits. To what extent do you agree?