The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents the percentages of people in five different
age
groups in Iceland from 1990 to 2020.
Overall
,
while
the data for the two younger
age
sets decreased considerably, the adult population from 25 to 54 witnessed an upward tendency and the bracket of citizens over 55 saw the least fluctuations within 30 years. In every decade surveyed, adults aged 25 to 54 accounted for the largest percentage of the Icelandic population. Commencing with just north of 30%, it increased noticeably, reaching approximately half of the population in 2020.
In contrast
, the figures for younger
age
groups showed downward trends. The people who were
at
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of 15 to 24 recorded a sharp decline. It fell roughly from 22% in 1990 to 8% in 2020 and ended up as the smallest
age
bracket. Meanwhile, children aged under 14, despite dropping from around 25% to 18%, remained the second-highest
age
group over the reviewed period. Regarding the elderly categories, in the first ten years, the proportion of 55 to 64 and that of those aged above 65 stood at around 13% and 12%, respectively. Towards the end of the period,
while
the former decreased insignificantly to 10%, the data for the latter stayed nearly constant.
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