the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.
The chart clarifies the
amount
of goods transported in the UK between Change the quantifier
number
1974-and
2002.The methods of transport used were Correct your spelling
1974 and
road
,water,rail, and pipeline.Overall
, the most way used was the road
whereas
, the pipeline is a little one.
Firstly
, Road
: the road
was exploited by 64 million
tonnes
in 1974 while
this
proportion dropped to 98 in 2002. Secondly
, Water:about 39 million
tonnes
were used in 1974 and this
percentage was raised to 62 in 2002. Thirdly
:Rail: the numbers of used the rail in 1974 extremely 40 million
tonnes
and this
percentage was little dropped to 41 in 2002. Fourth: pipeline: about 4 million
tonnes
were used these in 1974 and this
proportion was going up to 20 in 2002.Submitted by mohammedelhassan811 on
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