the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp

arison. write at least 150 words.
The chart clarifies the
amount
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of goods transported in the UK between
1974-and
Correct your spelling
1974 and
2002.The methods of transport used were
road
,water,rail, and pipeline.
Overall
, the most way used was the
road
whereas
, the pipeline is a little one.
Firstly
,
Road
: the
road
was exploited by 64
million
tonnes
in 1974
while
this
proportion dropped to 98 in 2002.
Secondly
, Water:about 39
million
tonnes
were used in 1974 and
this
percentage was raised to 62 in 2002.
Thirdly
:Rail: the numbers of used the rail in 1974 extremely 40
million
tonnes
and
this
percentage was little dropped to 41 in 2002. Fourth: pipeline: about 4
million
tonnes
were used these in 1974 and
this
proportion was going up to 20 in 2002.
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