the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

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The chart clarifies the

amount

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number

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of goods transported in the UK between

1974-and

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1974 and

2002.The methods of transport used were

road

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,water,rail, and pipeline.

Overall

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, the most way used was the

road

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whereas

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, the pipeline is a little one.

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Road

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: the

road

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was exploited by 64

million

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tonnes

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in 1974

while

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this

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proportion dropped to 98 in 2002.

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, Water:about 39

million

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tonnes

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were used in 1974 and

this

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percentage was raised to 62 in 2002.

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:Rail: the numbers of used the rail in 1974 extremely 40

million

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tonnes

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and

this

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percentage was little dropped to 41 in 2002. Fourth: pipeline: about 4

million

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tonnes

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were used these in 1974 and

this

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proportion was going up to 20 in 2002.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individual. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?