the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.

the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.
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The diagram illustrates how the Norbiton industrial
area
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will change in future.
Overall
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, there will be extensive changes in the terms of removal of industrial
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area
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, the addition of commercial, medical, recreational and educational facilities
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the development of transportation facilities. Now, there is a
road
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running from the west to the east in the south part of the map. A roundabout lies in the
center
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of the
area
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and there is another
road
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which runs from the roundabout to the east that some factories are situated along them. In future, all factories will be demolished to make way for other facilities. A smaller roundabout will be added just under the old one in the middle of the southern
road
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as well as
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a shop
area
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and medical center between two roundabouts. There are plans to build a school, a playground and some housing
area
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which will be accessible from the other
road
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. Two new roads are planned to be constructed running from the old roundabout to the Northern and Northwestern part. Both will reach some parts of the residential
area
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned development
  • existing facilities
  • proposed changes
  • infrastructure
  • public spaces
  • sustainable development
  • green spaces
  • pollution control
  • local community
  • job creation
  • amenities
  • property values
  • displacement
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental degradation
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