The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-tim e work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of
graduate
and postgraduate pupils in the UK after finishing college, except for full-time jobs in 2008.
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