The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015.

The graph provides information about how many people

visiting

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a selected

carribean

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caribbean

island

, over a seven-year period between 2010-2017. The period witnessed an increasing trend of

number

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a number

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of

tourits

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tourists

staying on the

cruiseship

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cruise ship

. Meanwhile, the

number

of

visitors

staying on the

island

was

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slightly fluctuated and showed little change. In general,

however

, the graph shows an increase in the total

number

of tourists coming to the

island

. The total

number

of

visitors

started at 1

million

in 2010 and increased considerably every year during the period except between 2015-2016

where

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the

number

was remained

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remained

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static. After that, the

number

rose rapidly between 2016 to 2017, from 2.75

million

to 3.5

million

respectively. Regarding the

visitors

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staying on cruise ships, it

was fluctuated

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fluctuated

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in the first three years between 2010-2013.

However

, the

number

rose significantly between 2013-2017, increasing from 0.5

million

to 2

million

, respectively.

While

the

number

of travellers staying on

island

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the island

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started higher at 0.75

million

in 2010

compare

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compared

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to travellers living on the cruise ships, in 2017, the

number

of

visitors

staying on

island

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the island

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was less than the one who lived

in

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on

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the cruise ships