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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selectng and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selectng and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart informs the reasons of agricultural
land
 becomes less productive which is divided into four categories.
Also
, the table depicts the regions
suffered
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that suffered
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land
degradation
 in three
continental
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continents
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 namely North America,
Europe
, and
Ocenia
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Oceania
 during the 1990s. Generally, the global main reason for
land
degradation
 was
over-grazzing
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over-grazing
,
while
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apply
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the
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Europe
 suffered the highest total
land
degradation
. Looking at the proportion of causes of
land
degradation
 globally, a lot of animals and
reducing
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reduced
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 trees made
of
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up
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 65 per
cent
,
represent
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representing
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 35 per
cent
 and 30 per
cent
 respectively. Meanwhile, over-cultivation comprised 28 per
cent
 of worldwide
land
degradation
,
then
 other factors accounted for 7 per
cent
. Turning to
table
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the table
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 data,
Europe
became
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had
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 the highest
land
 degraded among
others continent
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other continents
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. As regards the breakdown of causes of
land
degradation
 in
Europe
, deforestation was the main reason with 9.8 per
cent
. Meanwhile, Oceania took the second place
of
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as
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region
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the region
a region
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 that suffered
land
degradation
 with the main reason
was
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being
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 over-grazing. North America accounted for 5 per
cent
 of
land
degradation
 with over-
culvitation
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cultivation
became
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becoming
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main
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the main
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 rea
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, degradation, europe, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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