Public transit(e.g. buses,local trains,metros/Subways) play an important role in helping residents and visitors get around large cities. Public transit should be free at all time for those who want to use it. Discuss both sides give your opinion.
Public
transport
is more common in well-developed countries. The buses
are the most common transport
system in our country. Also
, other public transport
is used by people such
as local trains
, metros
and flights. In the below paragraphs, I am going to explain about uses of public transport
and also
its benefits.
Firstly
, the residents of our country, local visitors
and also
international visitors
always used to travel
by public transport
. Public transport
such
as buses
, local trains
, metros
and also
including domestic flights. In large cities
, buses
and metros
/subways are more familiar to used to travel
by people. For example
, buses
are allowed to be used by taking daily passes at a minimum cost. The cost of a daily pass is worth it If you want to travel
a long distance. For taking daily passes, A/c buses
or non a/c buses
are always optional. The cities
are covered with bus routes and local or metro
trains
. So the visitors
are easy to travel
around the cities
.
On the other hand
, for city development, the government had sanctioned money for public transport
. Because of this
, a lot of buses
, local trains
and metro
trains
are available to the public. Based on a large number of public transport
vehicles, the public is easy to use for regular travel
. It always makes a crowd-free
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crowd-free travel
a crowd-free journey
a crowd-free trip
travel
for residents and visitors
. For example
, In Bangalore, the Namma metro
is available to travel
around the cities
. The metro
train paths and their stations are connected to the city's inner and outer by its service. The urban area of cities
is well connected with these facilities. Due to
crowd-free services, visitors
can enjoy their journey and are also
easy to use based on its facilities.
In conclusion, Above mentioned public transit is always user-friendly to the public who wants to visit famous landmarks, Shops, malls and hospitals. In this
case, All public transport
is Interconnected with each other around cities
with urban areas. In my point of view, If you want to enjoy the weekend at a low cost you can get a daily pass or one-day pass for bus transit and also
you can use the metros
to visit a temple or a familiar landmark or any other purpose for any other area. Also
, subways are helpful for crossing the roads without interruption.Submitted by insighttribez on
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logical structure
Ensure the introduction clearly states your position and briefly outlines the points you will discuss. In your conclusion, succinctly recap your arguments and reassert your opinion to strengthen your essay's structure.
clear comprehensive ideas
Include a balanced discussion of both sides of the argument before stating your opinion. Even though you briefly touched upon the benefits of free public transport, expanding on the opposing view would provide a more thorough analysis.
logical structure
Use a wider range of linking phrases and topic sentences at the start of paragraphs to better guide the reader through your arguments. This can include phrases such as 'On the contrary,' 'Furthermore,' and 'As a result,' which will improve the logical flow of your essay.
relevant specific examples
Integrate more specific examples and data to support your points. While you mentioned buses and metros in large cities, incorporating statistics or case studies would make your arguments more convincing.
complete response
Revisit the prompt to make sure your essay thoroughly addresses all parts of the task. Your essay primarily discusses the benefits and availability of public transport but does not fully engage with the argument regarding free public transit. Providing analysis on the feasibility, effects on city revenue, public welfare, etc., would result in a more complete response.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.