The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.

The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.
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the number of
times
Mauritius adolescents consumed three different kinds of fast food over a period of 30
years
, from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
hamburgers increased the most significantly in the period.
While
fried chicken started at the lowest point and gradually went up, the opposite was true for fish and chips, which witnessed a rapid reduction. In 1985, there was only an average of 5
times
one teenager had chosen pizza in one year, the same trend applied to hamburgers which were a mere 2 per cent higher. Over the next five
years
, both categories increased gradually, the number of
pizza
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and hamburgers consumed were 20 and 40 respectively. Hamburger's figure witnessed a soar in the next five
years
,
then
hit the highest point in 1995, which was 100
times
and stayed stable. Pizza
also
grew and reached a peak in
this
time, which was over 80
times
. As regards the remaining category, fish and chips were the most popular food among teenagers in 1985, a hundred
times
per year.
However
,
this
contained volatile data, saw a fluctuation in 10
years
, went down to 84 and rose again in late 1995. After that,
this
figure went down dramatically, and reached its lowest point in 2000, remaining at 40
times
.
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