The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph illustrates the percentage of how

much

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many

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people registered

the

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in the

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three categories in

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the US

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from 1970 to 2010. As is generally seen in the data, 'truck' was mostly the most popular type to register and '

bus

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' was the least preferred throughout the period.

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the graph, 'truck', with the highest figure of 48%

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1970, had a drastic fall of approximately 20% in a decade. After the decrease, the figure rose gradually until the end of the period.

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, the proportion of '

bus

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' had a threefold increase from 5% to 15%

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the beginning of the period before descending slowly, which had an opposite trend with the category '

bus

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'. It is interesting to notice that the percentage of '

taxi

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taxis

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' fluctuated between 1970 and 2010. About 24% of people registered the type of vehicle in regard

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the baseline year,

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ascended to around 35% in 10 years. It had the biggest increase of 20% later in the data, after having a marked drop to about 15%.

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, it is notable that the ranking was stable except

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1980, when 'taxi' had a higher ratio than '

bus

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

commercial vehicles
vehicle registrations
share
trend
significant changes
milestones
popularity
predominant
convergence
divergence
registration shares
shifts in preference
timeline
dramatic increase/decrease

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