Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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the very fast and strong growing global economy is promoting businesses to be established to earn income. Some

people

think that the income should be invested in hospitals and

schools

and some individuals think that the

money

should be invested in high-rise buildings. Many

people

believe that high-rise building projects are very important for the city because they create eye-catching, majestic features and help the city have perfect beauty thanks to its architecture. Many

people

who buy apartments will create a large source of income for businesses, helping them become increasingly richer.

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, in recent years, land funds in big cities have become increasingly scarce, so they often choose apartments to live

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Besides

, some

people

think that

this

money

should be invested by the government in

schools

and hospitals. Because good quality equipment and tools will be provided and improved to support students with a good learning environment and the health care system will be more modern.

For example

,

schools

will be equipped with more air conditioning so students can stay cool

while

studying in the summer.

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Overall

, many

people

think that big cities should have high-rise buildings,

others

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think that the government should invest

money

in

schools

and clinics. In my opinion, the government should invest

money

in high-rise buildings because it will help the country's economy develop.