Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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People
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who decide to settle in a particular state which
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a regulation to talk in a foreign
language
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potentially can lead to issues in social and practical. I strongly agree, because
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issue is affected by
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barrier
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and limited
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,
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in
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local
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will cause
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have
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hardship in
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where they live.
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People
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own finite capabilities in
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will lead to misunderstanding, and false
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in interacting with others.
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also
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become
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serious
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a serious
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challenge for those
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who aim
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to access public facilities,
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connections and
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crucial information.
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, individuals who are not
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European and
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who
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ability in English will pass hardship when they select to live in
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regular basis activities
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, limited
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also
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involve in causing practical problems. Mastering proficiency in
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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is
important
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an important
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requirement for
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who tend to be engaged in great
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such
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as studying overseas, working in multinational companies and expanding relations. If
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situation occurs,
people
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might find them still enter
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the low
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level, and genuinely it will impact on
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problem
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problems
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such
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frustation
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frustration
and
dissapointment
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disappointment
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will continue
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drain
self confidence
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,
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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who
have
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limited
skill
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skills
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in foreign
languaga
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language
languages
will tend to see themselves as a person that
own
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low level
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capabilities.
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, I strongly believe that folks who prefer to reside in
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which has
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laws
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that must
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foreign
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language
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languages
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will induce social and practical problems.
It
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is
due to
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language
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barrier and limited
opportunities
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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