Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
People
who decide to settle in a particular state which have
a regulation to talk in a foreign Change the verb form
has
language
potentially can lead to issues in social and practical. I strongly agree, because this
issue is affected by language
barrier
and limited Fix the agreement mistake
barriers
opportunities
.
Firstly
, inability
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the inability
in
local Change preposition
to
language
will cause individual
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individuals
have
hardship in Verb problem
to experience
environment
where they live. Correct article usage
the environment
People
own finite capabilities in Change noun form
People's
language
will lead to misunderstanding, and false interpretation
in interacting with others. Fix the agreement mistake
interpretations
This
also
become
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becomes
serious
challenge for those Add an article
a serious
aim
to access public facilities, Correct pronoun usage
who aim
expanding
connections and Wrong verb form
expand
understanding
crucial information. Wrong verb form
understand
For example
, individuals who are not non
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European and
european
who Change the capitalization
European
lacks
ability in English will pass hardship when they select to live in Correct subject-verb agreement
lack
United
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the United
doing
regular basis activities
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do
Secondly
, limited opportunities
also
involve in causing practical problems. Mastering proficiency in foreign
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a foreign
language
is important
requirement for Add an article
an important
people
who tend to be engaged in great opportunities
such
as studying overseas, working in multinational companies and expanding relations. If this
situation occurs, people
might find them still enter low
level, and genuinely it will impact on Add an article
the low
a low
personal
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a personal
problem
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problems
such
as frustation
and Correct your spelling
frustration
dissapointment
. Correct your spelling
disappointment
This
will continue into
drain Change preposition
to
self confidence
. Add a hyphen
self-confidence
For example
, Add an article
an individual
the individual
individual
who Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
have
limited Change the verb form
has
skill
in foreign Fix the agreement mistake
skills
languaga
will tend to see themselves as a person that Correct your spelling
language
languages
own
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owns
low level
capabilities.
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low-level
To conclude
, I strongly believe that folks who prefer to reside in place
which has Add an article
a place
law
that must Fix the agreement mistake
laws
utilizing
foreign Wrong verb form
utilise
language
will induce social and practical problems. Fix the agreement mistake
languages
It
is Correct pronoun usage
This
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language
barrier and limited Correct article usage
the language
opportunities
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