The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about the
sales
rates of major cell phone brands between 2006 and 2012.
There are three clear trends visible in the data. Firstly
, Apple
and Samsung increased constantly, with Samsung finishing at the highest level of sales
overall
at 396.5 million
. While
Apple
made the lowest amount of sales
at the start, with a mere 2.3 million
in 2007, this
soared to just over 136 million
by the end of the period
, putting Apple
in the third-highest position.
Motorola and Ericsson saw an overall
decline, reaching the same number of sales
in 2012. The figure for Ericsson by 2007 had risen by about 28 million
, hitting a peak of its total period
, and then
it fell steadily until the end of the period
. However
, the sales
rate of the Motorola brand fell considerably until 2010. Remaining roughly stable at 40 million
, then
it declined again, reaching 28 million
mobile phones sold.
Regarding Nokia, it started at 345 million
sales
in 2006, rising to 475 million
after the next two years, reaching the peak of the total period
. Furthermore
, the figure fluctuated wildly, ending at 335 million
sales
, making it the second most popular item in the last
year.
Overall
, it is clear that
Nokia sold the highest number of mobile phones, while
Apple
's products were the least popular items. Also
, it is noticeable that Samsung experienced the most significant increase throughout the period
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