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contemporary
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there are increasing concerns or interests regarding exploring the
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of
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buildings
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where
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individuals live
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the factors and the roots of
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. On one hand, there are
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,
coupled with
the inspirations of artistic works and
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in
aventure
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adventure
, all of them push
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to look for the
history
of their dwellings, especially for those who live in
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area, where are fulfilled with a variety of secrets and
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legends
elegance
legacy
.
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, one memory that the majority
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can not forget is falling into sleep with the stories related to the
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fantasies
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occured
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occurred
in a house or a castle.
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curiosity
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history
had
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in their mind since
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childhood.
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, as can be seen, a
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myriad
of
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ancient
pieces have
recentely
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been found and
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out from the private residence.
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, the Sanxing
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remains have been found in
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garden of Mr. Alexander, and
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to
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occasional decoration of
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immobility
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, in
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the
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view.
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notices, a large
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of individuals
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part
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movement of Looking for the
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of reasons and factors, and in my perspective,
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curiosity and interest constitute
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first step of progress,
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fellow research is
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paramount in
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reveal
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the secret or something unknown
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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