Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree and what can be doen to reduce it
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with
plastic
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pollution
. Some Use synonyms
people
believe that banning Use synonyms
plastic
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bags
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are
necessary for reducing the number of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
plastic
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pollution
, Use synonyms
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others
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apply
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bags
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a better
the better
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my view, totally banning from using Change preposition
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plastic
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bags
for shopping are the best Use synonyms
sollution
to address Correct your spelling
solution
this
issue Linking Words
due to
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plastic
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become
the biggest Wrong verb form
becoming
pollution
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materials
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material
in
worldwide.
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apply
the
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at the
disadvatages
of banning totally from using Correct your spelling
disadvantages
disadvantage
plastic
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bags
for shopping, Use synonyms
people
believe that Use synonyms
plastic
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bags
can bring a lot of Use synonyms
stuffs
from Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
market
and make Add an article
the market
easier
to bring to our Correct pronoun usage
it easier
home
. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
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paper
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bags
become the alternative ways to replace Use synonyms
plastic
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bags
, Use synonyms
residents
believe it is not enough for carrying heavy Correct word choice
as residents
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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the traditional
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bags
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paper
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bags
are more vulnerable to water. They believe Use synonyms
plastic
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bags
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is more
cheaper than other Verb problem
are
materials
, so if they change to use other Use synonyms
materials
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bags
like Use synonyms
paper
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bags
, it will increase the price of goods.
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to
look Change the verb form
apply
the
advantages of Change preposition
at the
forbiding
permanently from using Correct your spelling
forbidding
plastic
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bags
. Use synonyms
Plastic
become Use synonyms
the
major Correct article usage
a
pollution
not only Use synonyms
in
land but Change preposition
on
also
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sea
. Add an article
the sea
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materials
can Use synonyms
threat
our environment if we are not aware Replace the word
threaten
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of
that
impacts. Correct determiner usage
the
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plastic
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bags
are easy to contaminate our environment Use synonyms
due to
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materials
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are
hard to Wrong verb form
being
decompostion
. Correct your spelling
decompose
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plastic
waste Use synonyms
need
to be recycled because Change the verb form
needs
they
can't Correct pronoun usage
it
be distinguish
without Change the verb form
be distinguished
recycle
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recycling
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consequently
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people
change from Use synonyms
plastic
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bags
to Use synonyms
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bags
for shopping because the Use synonyms
totte
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bags
can Use synonyms
cary
a lot of goods and Correct your spelling
carry
resistant
to water. Because of Add a missing verb
are resistant
that
reasons, I believe that Correct determiner usage
those
people
should change Use synonyms
for
using Change preposition
from
plastic
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bags
to Use synonyms
another
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another material
other materials
materials
like Use synonyms
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totte
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tote
bags
or Use synonyms
paper
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bags
.
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people
believe that they feel better Use synonyms
for
using Change preposition
about
plastic
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bags
for shopping, Use synonyms
while
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people
disagree because Use synonyms
plastic
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materials
can damage our environment. I believe that Use synonyms
plastic
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bags
should be banned and we move to use Use synonyms
paper
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bags
or Use synonyms
Use synonyms
totte
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tote
bags
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