The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie
chats
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charts
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displays
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the
different
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difference
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in the proportions of energy produced in a country between 1983 and 2003
Overall
, all the proportions of energy produced
remainstable
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remain stable
in the period.
However
, the coal and oil bought
reduce
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reduced
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the
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by the
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same
percent
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percentage
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from 1983 to 2003
Firstly
, the
percent
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percentage
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of coal,
natural
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and natural
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gas in 1983 at
the
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apply
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23% and 11 %
while
,
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in 2003
the
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apply
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coal
reduce
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reduced
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13
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by 13
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% and
the
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apply
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natural gas increased
21
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by 21
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%
On the other hand
hydropower in 1983 and 2000 at 4% in the period . After which, the oil from 42% in 1983
reduce
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reduced
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to 38% in 2003
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • energy sources
  • increases
  • decreases
  • trends
  • analysis
  • significant
  • compare
  • changes over time
  • introduction
  • phase out
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