The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie
chats
Correct your spelling
charts
displays
the Change the verb form
display
different
in the proportions of energy produced in a country between 1983 and 2003
Replace the word
difference
Overall
, all the proportions of energy produced remainstable
in the period. Correct your spelling
remain stable
However
, the coal and oil bought reduce
Wrong verb form
reduced
the
same Change preposition
by the
percent
from 1983 to 2003
Replace the word
percentage
Firstly
, the percent
of coal, Replace the word
percentage
natural
gas in 1983 at Correct word choice
and natural
the
23% and 11 % Correct article usage
apply
while
,
in 2003 Remove the comma
apply
the
coal Correct article usage
apply
reduce
Wrong verb form
reduced
13
% and Change preposition
by 13
the
natural gas increased Correct article usage
apply
21
%
Change preposition
by 21
On the other hand
hydropower in 1983 and 2000 at 4% in the period . After which, the oil from 42% in 1983 reduce
to 38% in 2003Wrong verb form
reduced
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