The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare information on the ages of the populations of
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050. The pie chart is divided into 3 categories, namely 0-14
years
, 15-59
years
and over 60
years
.
Overall
, In
Yemen
, the age groups of 15-59
years
and over 60
years
will increase slightly in future projections for 2050.
However
, the age group of 0-14
years
will decrease dramatically, which
was
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similar to
Italy
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Italy's
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projection for 2050. In 2050, in Italy, 60+
aged
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people will be twice as much as in the past. In 2000,
it is clear that
the number of 0-14 aged children was more than half of
Yemen
's population,
whereas
,
this
figure for Italy is 14.3% which was the smallest proportion. In 2050, Italy and
Yemen
are expected to account for 46.2% and 57.3% of people aged 15-59, respectively.
In contrast
, people in the youngest bracket will have the lowest proportion in Italy at around 11.5%.
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