The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site
The
two
maps below illustrate the school
site in 2004 and how developed in 2024.
It is clear that
there is
extensive alternatives including a new building, Change the verb form
are
car
park and road.
In 2004, there were two
school
buildings
which had 600 students and two
schools separated by a path. School
building 1 surrounded
by trees. In the west of the Add a missing verb
is surrounded
school
buildings
, there was a sports field. Also
, there was a car
park in the northeast of the school
site which was next to the main entrance.
In 2024, the number of students will increase and reach to 1000 students. Also
, school
buildings
1 and 2 will connected together and the path between the two
buildings
will removed. Sports fields will demolished and a new school
building will constructed and accessed to school
buildings
1 and 2 with a path. In the east of the school
side, the forest will be knocked down and new car
parking will built which accessed to car
parking 1 with the road. Furthermore
, in the south of the car
parking, 2 trees will chopped and a new sports field will constructedSubmitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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