The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)

The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)
The graph given illustrates the proportion of four different electronic devices, namely an MP3 player, mobile phone, computer, and tablet purchased by each household over a twenty-year period from 1995 to 2015. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the percentage of all electrical categories saw an upward trend with various rates. A new item was introduced in 2005, which was the tablet. At the beginning of the period, the percentage of owning an MP3 player was highest, at about 18%. The data on mobile phones and computers were lower, at the same nearly 10%. In the following years, the percentage of households that bought mobile phones and computers rose sharply to approximately 70% and around 25%, in the next five years, before reaching the same peak, at about 95%, in the final year.
Similarly
, the figure for MP3 underwent a slight increase to nearly 30% in 2000,
then
it gradually grew to over 40% in 2015, compared to over 80% for tablets.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • ownership percentages
  • electronic devices
  • 20-year period
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • detailed comparison
  • highest ownership rates
  • dramatic changes
  • potential reasons
  • trends
  • shifts
  • insights
  • implications
  • future device ownership patterns
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